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| "Ties that Bond (and Gag)" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: *giggle*
Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 17:59 CST
Comment/Review:
Hee hee, Poor Toph. ^_^ And those images probably arn't what she needs. ^_^ Wonderful snippets then. Ja Ne, Zirra ^_^
| Title: Very Funny
Reviewed By: BlackLotus [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2006 13:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're writing is very good, but sometimes I had a hard time figuring out which character was talking at what point. Overall, I like this story so far. I'd say do a wedding scene, but I thought they had decided to just have sex instead of marry? Or was that sarcasam and I missed that? Anyway, whatever you are thinking of adding I am looking forward to reading.
| Reviewed By: Atara [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2006 16:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
LOL MAJORLY that's so funny. i'm not a kataraxzuko fan AT ALL but you kept me reading to the last chapter. wow, that was brilliant. i love how every chapter has it's own different occasion, and it's own mini story could definitely be expanded, but remains perfect on its own. i really REALLY enjoyed this. you pwn
| Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: yourmaster On: September 27, 2006 18:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT SOSOSOSOSOSO much, omg. YOU HAVE TO UPDATE! when you do email me! the_jesusfrek306@hotmail.com my friend made it up-_-
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