| "Unexpected Discoveries" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Calathiel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2007 15:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was hot! i agree with the other reviewers: write a sequel! Damn you're good at fics like this
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: beccapatty [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2006 14:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holy cow... that was an awesome awesome fanfic .. hehe i just love the idea of sakura watching the two of them go at it.. ahh but u should continue this fic and make the next chapter sasuke and narutos reaction and a threesome with the 3.. heyy then everyone would get what they want.. naruto would have both sasuke and sakura.. sasuke would have both naruto and sakura would help to ressurect his clan.. and sakura would have the guy shes always wanted with one of her best friends as well who she now likes too hehe.. 2 equally hott guys in bed with her.. what more could she want lol anywways gooood great awesome work..
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Title: love it!
Reviewed By: kougasmate [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 13:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is so freaking awesome! as sakura, i probably would've watched too! heck... I know I would've! but i love yaoi, so yeah. Anyway, you should add a little more on about what Sasuke does.
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Reviewed By: yuki bozu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2006 21:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
well i didnt really read it. just skimed but i got the picture. too bad you didnt write what sasukes reaction to sakura being outside was.
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