| "Fallen" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: MasacreInTheLivingRoom [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 22:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Personally I liked this fic because I found the ending funny. I mean you have to admit the fact that Itachi had a wet dream about Sasuke and Kisame noticed is abit funny. And I think you should make a sequel : p
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Title: Definately needs a sequel.
Reviewed By: Arie Date [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2007 21:24 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
No matter how many times I read it it seems to be a part of something larger. Like it's the first chapter of a multi-chap Uchihacest festival. Please continue. It just seems kinda unfinished.
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Reviewed By: blisblop2 On: December 22, 2006 01:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
If the sex had have been longer the rating would have been higher.
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2006 15:58 CST
Comment/Review:
u should really continue this story. its really good.
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Reviewed By: k1taky0ko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2006 18:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have captured my interest and I'll be glad if you would update this story. I hope you do update soon though I love Uchihacest scandals hehehe... you have a few grammar mistakes but nothing you can't fix. -k1taky0ko
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Reviewed By: k1taky0ko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2006 18:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have captured my interest and I'll be glad if you would update this story. I hope you do update soon though I love Uchihacest scandals hehehe... you have a few grammar mistakes but nothing you can't fix. -k1taky0ko
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Title: Continue
Reviewed By: k1taky0ko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2006 18:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have captured my interest and I'll be glad if you would update this story. I hope you do update soon though I love Uchihacest scandals hehehe... you have a few grammar mistakes but nothing you can't fix. -k1taky0ko
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Reviewed By: kakashifangirl_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2006 02:22 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a very sick mind.....please write more....please? PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ITASASU IS REALLY GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!WRITE MORE!the dream was a nice touch. 10 of 10!!!!!no! 110 of 10!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: burr On: July 31, 2006 05:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! you should definitely turn it into a longer story! ;)) good job :))
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