Title: wow Reviewed By: lil one On: August 03, 2006 00:50 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: this story is well thought about; but you do have errors. I enjoy it very much. I can see your an aspiring writer, so just be sure to reread your stry after every chapter. you'll be surprised at what you see. And keep it coming; this may get an award.