| "Omega Quintesson" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: Tragic
Reviewed By: AngelOfTime [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2007 16:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am not the one who likes to read sad endings, but your short interaction showed me a bond between the two Transformers that I never had a chance to look at. You could describe the meeting and the desire to be perfect very well and most intentions were clear. But I couldn't quite picture the little mechanical organisms you said were an ocean of blue. Do they look like the Transformers or do they have their own unique design? Other than that I was really pleased with the outcome. Very well written.
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: Cyndi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2007 10:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great hook. You pulled me right in and then awed me with your imagery. What a wonderful, tragic tale. Poor Ultra Magnus, poor Optimus. This fic had a very Akira-like feel to it and I enjoyed it so much that I had to pop in and comment! :) You're talented!
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Reviewed By: DragonEmperess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 15:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Woah.. that was realy heavy. If I had nanomachines I would finally have friends... I hope you are going to do a 2nd chapter because I would like to see how he deals with his brothers death without going insain with guilt.
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