| "Invincible" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Zofo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2008 16:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very good story and pretty much in character. The tentative but determined way Goku approached it, and the cautious but curious way Vegeta reacted were just perfect. Liked the bit near the end when Vegeta was telling Goku to get on with it, very like him, I could just imagine the smirk and sparkling eyes.
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Reviewed By: topbear197 On: January 10, 2008 10:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You won't believe how much I loved this story that I actually translated it. I love that after a long jouney they fighters finally realise their feeling and get together. Esp. Veggie's part, he must suffered a lot. Thanks for a good story.
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Title: Excellent as always
Reviewed By: StarbearerTM [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 16:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very touching and nicely written. Has a good balance of the frustrations between the two, and the culmination of years of longing.
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