| "A different kind of trouble" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2009 00:04 CST
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this sounds like it's going to be an interesting story. although you've made kagome become a demoness and learn fighting and magic techniques that would take years for most people and demons to learn in only three months please do your best to make sure she isnt super kagome (at least not overly so, a little is ok) who should kagome be with, well i like almost anyone (not naraku, shippo, or rin) and i even like it when she's with 2 or 3 guys. one pairing that i dont get to see to often is pairing her with koenma, unless of course you make her related to him like i've seen in a few stories. dont worry about bad reviews, write because you like to and ignore all flames. I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Nekomiko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 09:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read most of the Inuyasha yuyuhakusho crossovers ever made and this one of the most original i have ever read. Its great , I cant wait to read the next chapter. And Personally I think that Kagome should be paired with Hiei, I love them as a couple.
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Title: I like
Reviewed By: Saphieralynn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2006 00:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like and am woundering when you will be adding the next chapters for I am excided to see what will happen next Sincerly Saphieralynn
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2006 04:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Interesting begining! I like kagome's sensei. I also like her as the target of the Taguros as the plot device to involve the Spirit Detectives. Will inuyasha ever open the well and come see her again? It's gotta be hiei/kagome -- they're the best! It's been months since you started this -- hope you continue with it soon!
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Reviewed By: lady silverfox a.k.a. mychelle 79 On: August 03, 2006 12:11 CDT
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make it a kagome & kurama(youko) story!!!! good story please write more please!!!
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Reviewed By: bluemoon_175 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2006 19:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is going to be really good, it sounds so fantastic I can't wait to read more. So I hope you UPDATE ASAP PLEASE :^)
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Reviewed By: MichiruAOZ [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2006 19:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very cool! Please update soon. I am anxious to see where you are going with this! Can't wait! Ja ne. ~.^ Michiru
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2006 11:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: Shadow Maiden [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2006 02:16 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it, good start, what do the Toguro brothers want with Kagome? Her power? Will Touya make an appearance (being an ice user), and what about Naraku and the Shikon, will the story center or lean that way? Or a new foe (like the Toguro's)? Hm..Keep up the good work, I can't wait to see where you go with this. By the way, you may want to enable anonymous reviews (you have it set so only registered members can review). ~Kage
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Reviewed By: Nami_wave_101 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2006 22:42 CDT
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Luv it so far!! keep it up!
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