| "Another Naruto High School Story" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: OMG
Reviewed By: lionspride [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 23:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was hilarious. The chacters were OOC, but in a good way. I could totally see Shino sugar high off a pixie stick! It was sooo funny. Please, keep it going! And I love your writing style. Keep it up. I'm almost afraid to see what would happen if you added Gaara. Just remember to put in serious stuff now and then. My face hurts from laughing too hard. It needs a breather every now and then. ^-^
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Title: rofl
Reviewed By: RavenSilverKat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 13:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was hilarious!!!! They may all seem terribly OOC but, I don't care in this case! It's too funny! ^.^
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Title: review
Reviewed By: shattered-words [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was hilarious. I would have loved to see Shino take a swig of the pixie stick and then rush off tearing his clothes off >.> Ahem, that is.. that was funny! Good stuff.
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Title: review
Reviewed By: shattered-words [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 15:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
While the title isn't what caught my eye, it was still good. I think i like the idea as Sasuke being all emo and gothic, but he's been put into the whole creepy way where he thinks everything is conformist, lol. But I can certainly understand since he's...strange. Good stuff, i might just read more.
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