| "The Tempest" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: Mamosere On: May 21, 2012 02:29 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow it's a great read. I really love it. It's sweet and romantic. Thank you for such a wonderful story, hope you write a sequel for this. I really enjoyed reading this. |
Reviewed By: ananova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2010 11:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfect, just like all of your other stories. I loved the question and answer session at the end. It was a great way for them to finally resolve things between them. I can definitely see Inuyasha doing something like that since whenever he does try to say something he ends up putting his foot in his mouth. I love how you are able to keep them in character. This is the type of thing I would have loved to see happen in canon. Great job.
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2008 02:39 EDT
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I love the Q/A turn on this... it's so much more in-character for them to do something like that, since Inuyasha isn't really a "feelings" guy... such a great story!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2008 14:48 EDT
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so cute
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Reviewed By: appelcline [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2006 13:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe I didn't review this fic when I first read it. I was just looking through what other fics you'd written (after reading your Halloween one) and saw this one and noted that it's bookmarked among my favorites. So I looked to see if I'd reviewed, and -- bad me! -- I hadn't. The reason I love this fic is the questions at the end. It seems like a way that IY might actually open up, without having to find words for what he feels, and so it was a good idea for a fic. I've read the story more than once, so thank you for the enjoyment.
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Reviewed By: Mirage [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 01:43 EDT
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ahhhh! i know i know, i reviewed already, but i read this again and i loved it even more! so i thought it only right to review a second time! oh man, i love that yes and no session! so cute. and a little naughty. but so, so good. really, i love this fic beyond words! they fail me at the moment. great job.
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Reviewed By: Mirage [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 19:06 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWW! i really wish there was like more. like a whole story. this was so incredibly good. i'm really impressed. the only thing stopping this from being a perfect ten is i want more. i know, how greedy!
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Reviewed By: Tanaga Mannie_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2006 00:12 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it it was too cute.
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: flrsblue [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2006 17:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked it a lot. to bad its a one shot. would have liked more. like an on going story. all the same this was nice.
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Reviewed By: Wolf Blossom [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 16:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CUTE! That question thing was amazingly well done.. =D
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2006 00:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok here is me DYING from the exquisite adorable sweetness!! Gah! So freaking romantic, I'm so jealous. I thought that was so classy, playful, and sensual- you made a great combo-an oh so tasteful too! Absolutely precious, this will go in my favs because it just made me feel so good. I agree with the others that you just laid the foundations for a great sequal whatever that may be. Great writing and dialogue. Thanks so much!
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Reviewed By: karla On: August 17, 2006 23:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! just wow!!!! you have to write a sequel!!!!!!!!!!! please please oh please?!?!?!?!?!?
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Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: August 17, 2006 12:52 EDT
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This is an extra cute version of the blanket scenario. I especially liked the Yes/No question and answer session. It seems very IC for Inu to be willing to only answer yes/no questions. Thanks for writing.
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Reviewed By: speedy_turtle [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2006 03:16 EDT
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i love it just the way it is! but if you do turn it into a story wonderful! this is a piece of art!
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Reviewed By: Cricket42(to lazy to sign back in) On: August 02, 2006 00:54 EDT
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Perfect just like always. But I think you should add some to it. Because it leaves you hanging. Maybe turn it into a story. ~Cricket42
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