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Reviewed By: Rokubi no Rajuu On: May 15, 2007 22:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
If the writer can't keep up wuth his stories does he run away from the problem? If so why? So this is a story of the great naruto fanfic that got away.
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Reviewed By: Saric [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 12:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well another good story discontinued. Though I'm sad to see that it hasn't bee updated since October of 06 I'm glad to say that this is a good story so far.
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Reviewed By: nanamen On: October 13, 2006 02:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
hallo I just read you're fic and after the first chappie I was excited and and thought: woow in original plotline I can't see what happens in the next chapter but then in the following chapters you just wrote about the past!? And that isn't anything new.. I mean we all know now what happened in the exams, that sasuke got the seal and bla.. bla.. that just takes the originalty of your story. I mean you have an interesting/original beginning and then you write the same thing as all the others. In the first chapter you wrote that sasuke had already deserted and that naruto hadn't showed her true form and that she couldn't stop oro, so meaning the chunin exams you are going to write will have the same flow/things in overall. Do not missunderstand me, I think I will read your story further but I think it would be better if it moved forward and not backward.
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Reviewed By: kai28 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2006 01:06 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okkkayyy i know you have'nt gotten much reviews but this is really amusing please keep up the good work ill be watching for your updates.
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Reviewed By: Indreamland4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2006 19:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
update soon! it's not bad.
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