| "How to Get Killed in Ten Easy Screw-Ups" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] |
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Reviewed By: Fallen_dreams On: April 11, 2007 06:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absalutly f*ing amazing I loved it best fic I've read in weeks
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Reviewed By: Steel Butterfly430 On: September 05, 2006 22:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
LMAO!!! I-I can barely write just thinking about this. This made my day. It was bad enuff with Yohji and Omi. But noooo! They just had to get Ran in it and didn't think he'd do anything about it?! The only thing I can think of that would have made me pi** my pants would be if Ran was after them with his sword and Ken was coming with his bugnuks(spelling?)! Oh, retaliation for this will be painful knowing Ran. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 17:42 CDT
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That's not an ending! It's not over until one someone is bleeding the sidewalk! And the other someone is making it up to Aya in vert creative ways! But, I still like it!
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Reviewed By: Miss Macabre [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 10:04 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Ohhh. Man, I just got back from Adelaide and those last few chapters were the perfect thing to come home to. Thank you for that and sorry the reviews took so long- this is too hilarious for words.
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 08:19 CDT
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soxy's right! An epilogue would be interesting...those blonde Weiss boys have a habit of getting themselves in trouble don't they?
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Reviewed By: soxy On: September 02, 2006 04:57 CDT
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See this is why you don't get in a prank war with possible fiery redheads in the middle. Very dangerous! Loved the ending though, made me laugh. Now for an epilogue! Hee that would be 'interesting.'
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 23:19 CDT
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Such an entertaining ending, dear. I still love this story and it was such fun to write with you.
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Reviewed By: Sadness On: August 30, 2006 07:45 CDT
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well, I really liked this story, until i read that part about who was the uke (=Yohji) and I can't handle Aya being seme. Oh well, it was good before that^^
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 20:16 CDT
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evil. just evil
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 19:52 CDT
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OMG.... wow.... that has to be one of the most inspired prank wars evar. they're both eville little bastards, but that just makes it more fun! I'm lovin it! (no comparison to the crazy mcd's shittiness of a slogan)
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 14:29 CDT
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This can only end in...bloodshed. Poor Aya is going to have to kill them both and be left with Ken. That's so sad. *sniff, tear* Post more! Prove me wrong! Ummm...please?
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 00:12 CDT
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Woohoo! The chibi's gonna pay!! Right? Well, I hope so anyway. No one should be allowed to mess with Yotan except Aya! On with the fun!
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 16:06 CDT
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sorry i've been mia but you and dv know this fic is superb...so you don't really need me to tell you that do you?
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 12:38 CDT
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That's just gross. And scary. And I'd probably have thrown up. But, oh, what a way to exact revenge!
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Reviewed By: deunank [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 06:48 CDT
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Hee, you can tell Yohji is very peeved about the acne. I wonder who the tourist was? Great chapter! Yohji's mind is very entertaining.
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