| "New Akatsuki member" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: kiko90 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2007 04:36 CDT
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NNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! u did it again! u put in a cliffy!! how could u?! im goin insane! i gotta know what will happen next!!! please oh please update!!!!
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Reviewed By: insomniac247 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2006 00:21 CDT
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Sorry, I knew you said you were updating soon, but I hadn't realized you did update. I just came to check and voila! Anyway, this chapter was quite good. It seemed longer than the others which is good. It flowed well, and also answered some of my questions. I understood all that was going on. Good job!!
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Reviewed By: Pink Angel0303 On: October 05, 2006 17:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! please update soon!
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Reviewed By: brittness18 On: October 02, 2006 08:31 CDT
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i love it plz update pretty plz
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Title: hey....
Reviewed By: cambianca On: September 14, 2006 07:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv it.... Pls update soon. Well inform me if u do, u did great and I've never seen Skura like that before :)
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Reviewed By: insomniac247 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 12:03 CDT
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Well, at first Sakura seems OOC, but initial impressions aren't always accurate. Therefore I'll need to see more before deciding on an opinion there. These characters can sometimes be extremely hard to keep in character. I've been wrestling with that myself. I have a fear she might be too strong. It's hard to keep a character interesting when they're invincible. Again though it's a bit early in the story for snap judgements. I'm curious as to why she's trying to prove to Sasuke that she's strong. Again, that might be explained later. And I wonder why she wants to join Akatsuki. They're a bad lot, not respected by anyone. I wonder why she'd want to become part of that? Well, those are my speculations. If you continue the fanfic. perhaps my questions will be answered. As for grammar and what not. I don't feel qualified to critique that. I'm horrible at grammar. :) If you can manage it, longer more descriptive chaps would be helpful. I know it's hard when no one really reviews. I definitely know how that feels. Kind of takes the wind out of your sails. Hang in there. A Sakura-centric fic like this one could be interesting. She gets left out a lot. It's too bad too. I like her character. She's the most emotionally stable of the lot. :) Sorry for blabbering.
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Title: Update!!!!
Reviewed By: Lady Argeneau [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 10:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's hard to find fanfics with Sakura like this as well as Itachi in it!! I dun wanna rread the ones where he is only used for yaoi with Sasuke!!!! -Major Itachi fangirl- So PLEAAAAAAAAAASEEEEE!!! Updates!!!
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Reviewed By: yuki bozu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2006 17:30 CDT
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Ok people so you ( Im talking to like the 3 ppl who actually commented) think I should continue right? Well I just might with the angry cuss words and threats sent to my email if i dont continue.=) I guess there are some ppl who enjoy my stories. ok well my friends maybe you can help me get my inspiration back. send me any ideas you have for any of my stories =) hit me back! =P
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Reviewed By: mecha On: September 07, 2006 17:06 CDT
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I really enjoyed this piece so far, at least what little there was to read. If you think it's ok to just stop in the middle of a story, your depriving the few people who do what you say of a really good stroy with alot of potential
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Title: Reviewing my own fics.....
Reviewed By: yuki bozu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 17:23 CDT
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Yea well, I still dont know if people want to read my fics. I kinda understand them, Now that I think about it, my fics really are pretty corny so I dont know if I really want to continue. This goes for all my fics.
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Title: don't give up
Reviewed By: Nazozink [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 19:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
don't give up its pretty intresting Update! PlEASE!
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Title: UPDATE!
Reviewed By: xPrincess Gothx [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 01:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEEZ UPDATE!I LUV IT SO FAR!I don't get y some ppl dont review!Its really good so far!If you want the author to update then...REVIEW!...that is all.
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