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Title: Wow!! great story.
Reviewed By: Honebarluv On: August 22, 2006 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great story! The ending was great and now you have me wondering if there will be any half minkos in the future. ^_^ Lovely bit of lemon towards the end there. The whole story was well writen. I hope there might be more in the future. The dragon was a jewel in this crown of writing. Heh I wonder what king vrs dragon would be like.
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Reviewed By: Seiai [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 14:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! that was great! i loved it! Seiteki(from myspace)
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Reviewed By: Seiai [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 14:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! that was great! i loved it! Seiteki(from myspace)
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 14:34 CDT
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OOOO! AWWW!! So the dragon and the jewel went byebye? Hiei and Kagome are staying? Hiei is going to be an uncle (implied) lol. That was an unexpected ending. NICE JOB! TAKE ALL OF THE TIME YOU NEED, IT'S VERY HEALTHY! LOL, BYE
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Reviewed By: nomatter On: August 22, 2006 11:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your plots are awsome, I love your crossovers. Please don't stop writing. Your stories are the main reason I even come to this site.
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Reviewed By: Koosei [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 08:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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wow, I didn't think one review made THAT much of a difference. I jsut figured you'd be getting tons ofothers. I'm not usually one for writing reviews. I usually don't really know what to say. But, please don't stop with your fanfics. I love them. You're among the top three for the best writers I've found. It'd be a waste of an EXCELLENT talent if you just stoppped all together. I've read all but maybe one of your stories, and I can honestly say that they're all excellent. This one in particular is becoming one of my favorites. And as for the length of the chapters? I don't mind reading 31 pages. I think I actually like it better than just 10 pages at a time. Setting aside that fact of all the time tha it takes to actually write something like that, I think it's so much better when there's so much material in one update. I tend to look forward to the updates of people who have chapters like that more than I do others. But, I love your work. please don't stop. ... And now you can see why I don't usually like writing reviews. I tend to ramble on and on and not touch on one bit of the story itself. But, I think I've said all that I wanted to say. Great job, please don't stop!
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Reviewed By: critical eyes On: August 22, 2006 07:30 CDT
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You are one of my favourite authors and I have read all of your posted stories on AFF, Fichaven and here. Circle of souls was my favourite fic. I review as sendosha or critical eyes and I try to comment your stories as often as possible but sometimes I´m just too lazy as many others and it has nothing to do with your writing. I can remember that you received more reviews on AFF but here it´s another story. It´s strange but here on MM most readers like the usual pairings you know, I/K S/M K/A S/R. You are a Crossover Queen and I hope this will never change because I´m sick of the "normal" pairings. Maybe if you made Kagome a miko/demon/godess who is trained by Midoriko in her dreams, can suddenly fight like a war Godess, pair her with the perfect pretty boy Kurama and her blood sister Sango with the not so pretty and one head shorter Hiei you might get more reviews from the kids here. No really, I would miss your style and originality. Take as much time as you need but I beg you don´t throw away your talent because of lazy fans like me.
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Title: sorry
Reviewed By: tessie_fanfic [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 06:54 CDT
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sorry i havn't reviewed, collage has kept me busy, unlike most, mine is in session all year...but since term break is here, i can review and tell you how much I LOVE THIS STORY! your not doing anything wrong, i just havn't had time to review, keep writing, PLEASE! your one of 3 authers i still read no matter what! i've been following you since COS, and since then i have been reading everythign (well, expect for your m/m ones) so please keep writing! tessie
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2006 15:58 CDT
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oOO this is really getting interesting!! Keep up the great work!
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Title: Ch. 4
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2006 10:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shweet! I loved it, and hope to read more soon! It was awesome! ^^
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed(nli) On: August 16, 2006 23:41 CDT
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LOVE IT!! Cant wait for the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 21:21 CDT
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OOOOOOOO! BREAKOUT! (luv dat song), can't wait to see their great escape! [Es-CAPE! It's funnY It AlMOSt LookS LikE THe Word EsCape...] sry, really hyper, update soon, gunight!
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 12:56 CDT
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Great chapter! I can't wait for them to leave that bad place!!!
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Reviewed By: mannd1068 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 07:06 CDT
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This story is awesome! The concept is really unique. I mean everyone is always after Kag's jewel, but your idea with this one is really good! Keep the stories coming! D
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed(nli) On: August 14, 2006 00:31 CDT
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cant wait for the next chapter!! Love IT!!! ^-^
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