| "Breaking Point" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2008 18:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was really good! I love the inner battle, especially how it seems that losing is WAY batter than winning in this particular one.
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Reviewed By: the bastard child On: March 29, 2007 01:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
ah, i love it! i love how this is told in stages. very cute. i love how every time he says "you love me," she says "no." very cute. it was brutal and cruel yet sweet and satisfying(god that looks wrong...). i loved it.
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Title: Breaking Point
Reviewed By: vikikibouki@hotmail.com On: February 16, 2007 13:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The way that you have written this story is so touching, heartwarming even. I am not the type that is easily overcome by emotions, but this story is in the same category as "DBZVegeta" (Travelin' Soldier Series). What I like to call a real tear-jerker. Please continue to write. I thank you.
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