| "Feni's Snippets" Reviews/Comments [ 57 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ai Kisugi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2009 23:02 CDT
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Love it. Of course, Inuyasha actually tries to reason with her and has more sense once he's human. It was interesting to see in the IY Profiles that his intelligence goes up while he is human and I think you showed that very well in this piece. Inuyasha being logical, who would have thought? :-P
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Title: Choices
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2009 19:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Totally loving chapter 20! The conversation they should have had, indeed. Hey, there are a lot of blank spots in the manga where time skips forward a bit, and Kagome did stop "bein' a bitch about Kikyou", so maybe they really did have this conversation somewhere along the way, and Rumiko just forgot to let us know about it. Lucky for us you were there eavesdropping to write everything down!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2009 23:26 CDT
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i thought it was sweet-- i don't really think that kagome is really asleep because only babies and little kids can be jostled around like that without waking up even a little bit. i'm thinking that she may not have noticed completely when she started falling onto his lap, but she sure as heck would have noticed when he moved her. --she has a little brother who may or may not have pranked her while she was asleep. what little kid finds some scissors and decides he wants to cut something-- like the hair of his sleeping sibling? *chuckles* ♥
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Reviewed By: Murasaki-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2009 22:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww--you do the best super-tough cream-puff puppy.
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Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2009 21:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol, he sure is a downer on the new moon too isn't he. I almost wanted to ask him if he wanted any cheese to go with his whine ;D. The end was super cute and sweet.
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Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 16:04 CDT
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Yes! Men are such wimps.
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Title: Miasma
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2008 19:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh, thats when the Gods, with a sense of humor, introduced ordor into the poo-poo! Lmao.
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Title: Miasma
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2008 13:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Inuyasha...hahahaha. Short and sweet, and oh so cute. Well done!
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Reviewed By: xfalsetruth06x [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2008 15:18 CDT
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I can't believe there's only one CHAPTER LEFT!!! say it isn't so! this was a sweet snippet, though. i guess all i have to turn to, after this is over, is fanfiction. where have all the years gone?? 12 good ones for takahashi
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Reviewed By: Raeko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2008 16:57 CDT
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GAH hahaha, that was awesome! Thanks for the super cheer-up, Feni darling!
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Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 17:01 CDT
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Guess he can kiss his bachelor days goodbye, eh? Be careful what you wish for, Inuyasha. HA! Loved it!
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Title: Calligraphy
Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 17:24 CDT
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A little knowledge is a dangerous thing... But isn't hiragana entirely phonetic? Wouldn't dog always be いぬ？ Other than that I liked the story but it ended too soon!
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Title: Calligraphy
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 15:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Where on Earth did Miroku stash those things that they stayed with the shrine all that time? Makes me think he did it on purpose, LOL. I was expecting Kagome to see them one way or another, but see them in the past, not in her time! Well done.
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Reviewed By: xfalsetruth06x [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 14:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so creative i love it
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Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 14:14 CDT
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*sighs happily* You know, this is one of those one-shots that I would so gladly see continued in a very sort of 'comedy of errors' tone... a bit like QM! It would be soooo amusing!
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