Title: UPDATE Reviewed By: Subaru's Voice On: August 18, 2004 16:30 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: UPDATE UPDATE!! I like the story but it needs to be updated!! GRRRRRRr!! ^_~
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