"Foolish OLDER brother." Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Randomyaoifan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2009 15:00 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I liked it until Naruto's part.I wish he would have been cooler about it.I hope Sasuke doesn't break down in front of Itachi.I wonder if they'll have to relocate because of Naruto.Do you read these reviews?Reply if yes.
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Reviewed By: Arwenisdael Aladlara On: June 16, 2007 21:11 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Finally! Someone had the guts to write a Sasuke/Itachi story with Itachi as the uke! Not to mention the creativity. I mean, how many others would dare write something like this? If they did, it would be so OOC that it wouldn't even be funny... whereas your character developement is somewhat believable... in some sick, twisted, demented way. That was a compliment, by the way. Ah, sadism. So much fun to play with. Poor Itachi. He's lucky you aren't the creator of Naruto. ^_^
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Reviewed By: plusher [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 21:39 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OMG you have to finish this! this is soooooooo fucking HOTT!!
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Title: poor sasuke Reviewed By: Raeshi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 20:10 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: I really like your story. You can't find too many of this type with Sasuke as seme. I notice you haven't updated in a long time. Are you continuing with the story? I hope so.
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Title: Kami! Reviewed By: HowlingHeart [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2006 23:59 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: God that was hot! I don't know why but the crazy one's always apeal to me...you're version of Sasuke is smexy as hell! Anyway, I hope there's a juicy threesome between nutty Sasuke, Uke Itatchi, and Blondie Naruto! Hope yah update soon!!
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 18:28 CST Comment/Review: this is lyk the best sasu/ita fic ive read. but poor naruto. anyways, update soon.
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Reviewed By: Ceer Uchiwa [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 21:34 CST Comment/Review: Oh, poor Sasuke. His best friend ran out on him. I really want to know what happens next! Please continue! This is my FAVOURITE Sasu/Itachi fic! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: fLcL_FFx_lovr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 12:38 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: can't wait for next ch.
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Reviewed By: willow-jack [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 23:26 CST Comment/Review: Dude you rock. this fanfic is one of the olny ones i have found that has sasuke as the supeior in a sasu/itac relationship. up date soon please!!!
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Reviewed By: blisblop,me On: September 19, 2006 17:17 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Comment/Review: Stupid machine!I gave a 7 not a 4!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: blisblop,me On: September 19, 2006 17:15 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: I adore The brothers and this is an evilly hot idea.Raunchy and sweet in turns.Its suspencful too sooooooooo,whats next!!!!!i like that sasuke finds Itachi so attractive and that he has his own standards.Sasuke is mors powerful and experianced and likes to play!Itachi's feelings towards sasuke is a Mystery.Hell,whats not to like.. A couple spelling mistakes there and here,not much else to criticise really,on a third read(though I found this elsewhere first.
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Title: ^^ Reviewed By: kakashifangirl_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 13:20 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow....Sasuke's evil....I rea;lly liked it! You should update soon! ^^ Please? hurry!!!! ^^
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Title: hi Reviewed By: ItachisGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 17:06 CDT Comment/Review: It was an ... interesting story, I want to know how it ends though your new friend, ItachisGirl
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