Reviewed By:ChocoBits Daioh [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 16:24 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: CHAMPRU!Hai!I like this story!Continue ze updating :3
Reviewed By:Mrs Hatake [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 15:53 CDT Comment/Review: Hmm let's see. This is not a flame cuz i liked it! ^_^ hehe. lol anyway nice storyline. nd yay for you! I'm a fricken grammar/spelling freak nd i didn't find any errors that authors can't blame on their keyboards. lol anyway keep going! i'll be waiting!