| "An invitation you cant resist" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: RiceBall On: March 06, 2007 18:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
best mission ever!!! this is a really great story, very original and i like the way its playing out. great job, keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Lovely Lust [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2006 00:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked the last couple of chapters! Also, while I am a little disappointed that this fic won't continue, I am excited about the new version. Please keep on writing!!!
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Reviewed By: Cloverfire On: October 13, 2006 22:01 CDT
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OHHHHHHH!!!!! Such angst! Why's Mustang always got to be a bastard? I can't wait for the next chapter, and others in the future. I can't wait to see how this turns out.
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Reviewed By: FallenAngel7901 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2006 21:54 CDT
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Another wonderful chaper!! :) You are doing great! Can't wait for the next one!!!
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Reviewed By: FallenAngel7901 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2006 22:35 CDT
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please may we have some more???
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Reviewed By: cloverfire19 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2006 13:28 CDT
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OOOOOHHHHH!!!!! They're so cute together!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter. It'll be a nice juicy one, right?
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Reviewed By: reject4ever On: September 29, 2006 18:36 CDT
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u haaaavvvveee 22222 uuuupppdddaaattteeee sssoooonnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLZZZZZZZZZZZ!!!! it's getting good n' funny!
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Reviewed By: Lovely Lust [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2006 23:27 CDT
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Hurry and upload another chapter soon! I need to know what happens next and I can barely take what the cliffhangers do to me! XD
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Reviewed By: narinari [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 19:19 CDT
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i love it so much! hurry and load the next chpater so i can find out what happens!!!♥
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Reviewed By: cloverfire19 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 21:51 CDT
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Patiently?! I'm dying!! I need to know what happens. You know, you're getting really good at the whole cliffie thing. *pouts* It's not fair to just leave us little readers hangin like that.
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Reviewed By: cloverfire19 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 07:07 CDT
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what's with Armstrong?! Geez, he just knows how to ruin everybody's fun. more Mustang/Ed fluff in the future, yes? Any news on when you'll update your other stories? 'nothing is gone forever' is getting good, but i thought it was good before you revised it. update soon! I'll try to wait patiently, but no guarentees....
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Reviewed By: Lovely Lust On: August 28, 2006 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! Please hurry and upload the next chapter because I'm dying to know what happens next!
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Reviewed By: cloverfire19 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is getting intense! I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapters!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_lover666 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2006 18:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooooooo i love how this story is starting out. what i can grasp in this story that edwar and roy are secretly in love with eachother but dosent tell the other person :) and so they are sent on a mission to act as lovers HA soon the shit will fly LMAO please continue witht this story cause I LOVE IT SO FAR!!!!!! tee hee much love [C].h.r.i.s.s.y.♥
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