| "Nightmare" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Spinner2009 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 20:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you really should continue it! it would make such an awesome story! It is extremely well written you did an awesome job!
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Reviewed By: Mirage [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 02:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
AHHH! so good! the beginning is so vague and yet so terrifyingly clear, i was amazed. very creative concept. you capture inuyasha's "loss of innocence" so well. the bitterness and repeated feelings of being dirty. it was amazing. this moved me, i literally felt so sick. powerful writing. very nice job.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2006 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I guess I'm reviewing most of your fanfics tonight. This was a very good story. Very realistic. I know a couple of girls who have gotten raped before and they're still trying to get over it. I don't think I've met any guys that have, but I know it happens. It was very interesting that you used Inuyasha instead of Kagome....very creative. Keep up the good work. I can't wait to see more of your writings.
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Reviewed By: Avarwen (NSI) On: August 11, 2006 13:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I think I'm impressed! Inuyasha's general reaction to the rape was very well written and you had me believing. It seemed a little bit off at the end that he wouldn't pull away when Kagome tried to touch him (most victims don't like to be touched) but even that seemed to fit in this story... hm... think I just contradicted myself or something... anyway... You took a plot that has been done nearly to death and, while it wasn't entirely original and the ending was pretty much what I expected, you still managed to make me want to keep on reading it until the very end (and farther if you had kept going). Your writing flows well and you handled this beautifully. All in all it was very good, well written, and realistic. Good job! ^_^ ~Avarwen~
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