| "Forget Me Nots" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2008 00:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was so good! I kinda figured it was a dream the first time Rin said "Here its okay", but the last thing Sess says to her is just awesome! ^_^
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Title: the great...er...what?
Reviewed By: Northstar, too lazy to log in On: February 05, 2008 20:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehe, I loved it! Sesshoumaru's determination rings true right up to the moment that desire and Rin became too strong a temptation and he succumbed. Rin's innocent but eager participation is both endearing and sexy; all the way to the end. I also love how you didn't gloss over the "pain/virgin" thing but also didn't make it such a huge deal that it killed the mood of the story. Excellent, very well done! You get definate points for grammar and spelling and writing style too because I didn't notice any blunders. I'm as bad as the next author for occasional, obvious mistakes, but I appreciate the care that went into polishing this so the flow of the story wasn't interrupted by mistakes. Thanks for the great read! :) I'll be adding this to my "fav S/R lemons" folder!
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Title: Kami-sama
Reviewed By: Odi et amo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 05:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! This was the best Sess/Rin fic that i have read in...it seems like forever since I cam across something this great. I know it's been months at least! Do you write original stories as well? Well, even if you don't I'm going to have to take a peek at your account to see what else you've written. This was just....wow. I am truly amazed!!!
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Reviewed By: Shalane On: August 10, 2006 11:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was wonderful and you're an amazing writer. Thanks for sharing that with all of us and I hope you'll keep writing more like that. Wow.
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Reviewed By: simplyelena On: August 10, 2006 00:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I truly enjoyed this fic. I would have never guessed that Sess was just dreaming. Great job.
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Title: Forget Me Nots
Reviewed By: MetsukiKaraTen (not signed in) On: August 08, 2006 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just beautiful! Couldn't help but wonder who that wolf-youkai was though, and ... what next? LOL Since it seems that some of that icy wall has crumbled now... *shivers*
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