| "The Extent of Denial" Reviews/Comments [ 71 ] |
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Reviewed By: Verloren On: February 19, 2007 23:11 CST
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Aww, don't feel guilty. Stuff happens, you have a life outside of writing, all that. It's totally understandable. I'm just horrifically impatient, even though that's totally hypocritical since I pretty much NEVER update my own stuff... Take whatever time you need. No rush. Oh god, Waya's so CUTE! I just want to hug him (you know, when I'm not wanting to smack him upside the head)... You've totally made me fall in love with Waya/Isumi, I hope you know that. I wasn't really even into that ship before I started reading this fic, and now I think that they're just too cute together to NOT ship.
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Title: moonlight
Reviewed By: shihiru [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2007 22:00 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yes! Isumi x Waya again. I loved both of them ^^
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Reviewed By: Someone Gay On: February 11, 2007 21:20 CST
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I liked this story from the first chapter, it got better as it went along. Though something hurt me, I almost cried when Hikaru slept with Kota, it hit me in a sore spot, too close to home. I can almost want to choke you for that but I'd rather think about how its better for it, even if it did break my heart a second time.
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Reviewed By: Verloren On: February 07, 2007 00:30 CST
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I quite literally squeed when I saw that you'd updated. Finally, finally, FINALLY they got together! And Hikaru arguing about not being an uke was hysterical- even if he did sound like he was trying to convince himself more than anything else. I definitely wouldn't mind seeing him be seme, though. I've always had the impression that Hikaru and Touya would be equally dominant and sort of switch off on the seme/uke thing. It's all good, though. As long as they're together, I don't really care that much. So... next chapter? *pokes* Soon? Maybe? *pokes again*
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Reviewed By: Flafful On: February 04, 2007 19:38 CST
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Beautiful, amazing, wonderful. This story is so amazingly perfect. You have no idea how much I love it, seriously... and it was sooo cute, Hikaru arguing about being uke :D Also, you totally wrote the best way for Hikaru to say I love you, poor naive little boy not knowing he said it ;) Officially the best story i've read in a long time, and that encludes non fanfic-actual published books. UPDATE SOON!!!! I LOVE this story soo much and cant wait!!!!
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Reviewed By: wandering Muse [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2007 08:28 CST
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Hehe, yeah I realise it would be "too perfect" and idea if everything was perfect and with Akira from the first time but.. I still hate Kota for that! you can't make me change my mind about it! xD *laughs* dang.. how did you spot me hiding in that tree- I mean, I even went to the lengths of getting me a twig as well! *redoes her camoufkage research* Thank God for the new chapter. I was really starting to whimper, wracked with allsorts of nightmares like "..what if she's had enough of writing this fic?" *shudders* (what is your name, by the way?) At any rate, this was one sweet chapter. FINALLY! although there were things in there that made me feel edgy .. this whole "yours but not really". You better not have him return to Kora! you just CAN't do this to us! xD Thanks and I hope that chapter 32 will be here at some point in the near future =)
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Title: mikshake
Reviewed By: shihiru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2007 00:04 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Finallyyy...they had done it! This story is not going to end yet soon, is it? Please tell me 'no'
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Reviewed By: bb On: January 28, 2007 17:01 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Finally! Sex!! Great chapter. Loved it, thanks for the update! *^_^*
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Title: eee!
Reviewed By: Wandering Muse On: January 24, 2007 13:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am in complete and utter love with this fic! So much so that I feel like stalking you, tying you down and hovering around you in an obsessive fashion while you write.. and write.. and write _<
I really wished that Hikaru would deny him the actual sexual intercourse thingy and save it for Akira ;_____; you meanie! hehe, and is it just me or do boys, in general, really just never speak about the important things? xD I mean, all it needed was for one or either (kira/karu) to be frank and confess- and we'd have been spared all this heartache! I'm camping outside your e-home till you deliver the next chapter...
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Title: The official #1 Fan.
Reviewed By: Hakuza On: January 22, 2007 16:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg did you get my e-mail? I hope it sent! :D Re-reading chapter 30 is good. XD Hope you're having a good January 22nd because it's officially the saddest day of the year! :(
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Reviewed By: Flafful On: January 20, 2007 15:21 CST
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Hey, this story is so incedibly awesome. I'd been looking for a good HnG one for a while and finally found it, it sthe perfect balence of funny sad and lots of just plain hotness. I love it, keep going i cant wait for your next update!!
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Reviewed By: Verloren On: January 19, 2007 02:50 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Just WOW. I found this for the first time the other day, and after a few chapters I was completely hooked! You have an amazing way of writing that totally sucked me in. Sometimes I thought you were literally trying to kill your readers with the angst (and I mean that in the best way possible)... but it was so, so good. And yes, you're right, the characters are a little OOC- but I don't think it's outrageously so and it fits in with the story perfectly. It makes me believe that Hikaru would actually wear fishnet shirts with nothing underneath, or that Waya would be a homophobe. I think my favorite thing about this, though, is the phone messages the characters leave each other. The funny ones from Waya, and the completely heartbreaking messages Hikaru left on Akira's phone in particular. Sorry, I'm rambling and a little incoherant at the moment (sleep deprivation will do that to a person, I guess). My point is that this is incredibly written and I can't wait for more. *hugs*
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Reviewed By: bb On: January 14, 2007 20:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Sorry it took a while to review. I've been reading too many blind go fics at live journal and I still couldn't guess anything... U_U However I am happy that things are finally cleared up with Hikaru and Akira. *^_^* Right now my only concern is Kota's obsession with Hikaru. Please I beg of you: no more angst. My heat can't take it. LOL! Thanks for the update. I really enjoyed reading this chapter. *^_^*
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Title: sunshine
Reviewed By: shihiru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2007 00:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Cooooool chapter!!! Akira is going to be seme? Wow, That is so cute >_< GO! GO! Akira!!!
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Reviewed By: MewMew2 the original On: January 13, 2007 22:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your welcome. Anyways, I'll try to update when I can but I'm kinda over stressed, because I just found out that my boyfriend is going be shipped out in July. The worst part is I have a trip to france that I have go on, and I think that the time that I'm there and when he leaves might overlap. Very bad and just......bad for lack of a better civil term. Yeah, I'll review again if I'm in the mood.....
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