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| "The Extent of Denial" Reviews/Comments [ 71 ] | | Pages (5): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 ] | Title: Ace Chapter
Reviewed By: jou-kaiba-mokie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 05:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
The ratings and every thing is 10...nyways I liked this chapter very much, Isumi should have hurled that phone across the room, it makes anyone feel better, but the after effects, I'm not so sure:D so update soon ^_^
| Title: A+
Reviewed By: jou-kaiba-mokie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2006 14:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this chapter, thanks for the update update sooner!
| Title: sugar
Reviewed By: shihiru [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2006 02:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh... Wayasumi is so cool >_< dok! dok! dok! *punch the table* Please countinue.
| Reviewed By: bb On: October 06, 2006 07:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon. I can't wait to find out how all the drama will end, if it ends at all.
| Title: ...so much drama...
Reviewed By: jou-kaiba-mokie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 10:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this chapter, though. The nraw confession thing, I can't believe hikaru said that! ...wow, anyway maybe when hikaru finally "gets the guy" Akira wouldn't like it,and I was like when will this drama end?...sorry for he rambling, I have no idea of what to say other than I really liked this chapter:D
| Title: wow
Reviewed By: Hakuza On: September 26, 2006 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When I came home from school today I sat down at my computer determined to explore the hikago fanfiction here on mediaminer. Before long, I stumbled upon your fic and thought, "hey, the homework can wait". Well, a few hours and 14 drama-packed, tear-jerking, hot-n-steamy chapters later, I find myself bookmarking your page and anxiously awaiting the next chapter. I absolutely love this fic so far! >< Your writing style is so dramatic but not too corny. (which is nice, haha) At first I wondered if Waya would really react that harshly over the situation but in contrast to the way you characterized Isumi, it fits well. I think I love Isumi's character in this story the best so far. His angst is a bit above everyone else's, haha! I adore both pairings and so I've enjoyed the progress of both of their dramatic lives so far. >:] Also, I really like the way you formatted your story. By putting it into sections like that it makes it easier to read and sort of divides it into chapters. It gives it a good flow. From the sob-scenes (yes, I did cry) to the hot and passionate scenes (yes, I did drool) I've *really* enjoyed this story so far. I will greatly anticipate the next update! Thank you so much for this fantastic read! ^_^ My e-mail is badluck4129@yahoo.com Keep up the great work, I love it! >_
| Reviewed By: kk_twin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2006 18:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
Just minor edits, jou-kaiba-mokie. :) MewMew2 - Thank you so much! I'm terribly flattered. I will keep writing! ;) I'm so glad you're enjoying it!
| Title: ...LOL
Reviewed By: jou-kaiba-mokie[anessa] On: September 24, 2006 21:17 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was great, I really liked it...why did you revise all of your fics, their the same thing!nyways enough of that...it was a little funny at the end, and I can't wait to see what happens:D[anessavanella@aim.com]
| Title: Angst & General
Reviewed By: jou-kaiba-mokie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2006 11:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this chapter, I would love for you to update soon
| Title: Oh the humanity!
Reviewed By: MewMew2 On: August 27, 2006 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Waahhh!! You had me almost in tears at the layment of Hikaru, you're one of the best authors of 'Hikaru no Go' fanfiction that I have ever read (and trust me, that's alot). Please continue this heart wrenching story, like the other reviewr said oh the teenage DRAMA!!!!!!!!!
| Title: Not Expected
Reviewed By: jou-kaiba-mokie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2006 14:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well what I wanted to say is that there is so much teenage DRAMA! I hate drama!but I do like this fic. a lot. but I think you changed somethings towards their personalities Like or eg: Hikaru doesn't cry as much. Akira does(well he doesn't show it...) Hikaru has a better sense of fashion that Akira( come one, Akira has this hideous pink sweater he wore, during an episode). Even though Hikaru wore those shirts that annoyingly has #5's on them, I still like it, I guess you wrote out what you liked and didn't like for those two characters. It's your fanfic, your writing style and I didn't just criticzed that, I'm just saying I think it'a little OOC. BUT I still like this fanfic a lot. ^_^ *_^ *_*
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