"When Everything Falls Apart" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2007 12:04 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: nice very nice
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Reviewed By: kagomelittlekitten [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2006 16:01 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow, I was teary-eyed when Rin died and at the funeral, this fic is so sad t.t...You describe their emotions so well. Keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: raven of the dark [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2006 09:33 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: I was on the verge of crying, something which I do not do often... But, it was so heart-wenching, and I cannot believe you killed Rin... You have really written the character's response well, and thats kinda rare. Love to see more chapters, and keep up the great work!!! Cheers!!! =)
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Reviewed By: ANW0418 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2006 03:09 CDT Comment/Review: I hated that Rin died, but I love the story. Please update!
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Reviewed By: lady_selenity015 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2006 00:41 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: this story was so great please keep updating.....would love to find out is Kagome and Sess. will get back together again. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Taiyoukai Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 14:15 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OH my GOD!!! That was such a great chapter!!! Please update again soon! School is so boring right now and I really need something for me to look forward to!!*cries* Please? I'll beg and bring you cookies!!!
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Reviewed By: Minerva519 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 10:27 CDT Comment/Review: cool.
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Reviewed By: Taiyoukai Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 10:59 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: UPDATE!!!! I love this story and I really want to know what happens next!!! PLEASE update soon!!! You have a really ood grasp of who the characters are and what their responses are. Please, update soon!!!!
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