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Title: iiitsssmeeeaggaaianni
Reviewed By: inufan13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 17:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
haha short but good! keep writing!!!!!
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Reviewed By: SangoXMiroku132 On: August 23, 2006 23:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooo! I like Sango and Miroku in this so far! Can't wait for you to update!
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Reviewed By: J.mochi On: August 14, 2006 20:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is great! I really like the Miroku/Sango interactions, they're cool. I hope you write more of those in the future. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Wolf_godess On: August 14, 2006 00:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok GREAT story so far. I like the fortune addtions, I have never ready a story with that in it. GREAT JOB! just make sure you do not get to...um...UNorginal. So far I love it, But with storys like this there seem to be no twist, or suprises: so add some in! I also love the thing with sango, and miro, VERY orginal, the was they were introduced. ALSO, try to give more Background info, like: "Inuyasha, the younger half-deom brother to sessoumaour. (more background info like Age, looks and what he has done with his life thus far" ETC". Also try to do that with all the charctar. Now,If you have an editor tell them REALLY look again at the stor, I noticed a few spelling mistakes. If you do not have one I suggest you get one. Matbe a friend....*cough* or me *cough* lol. I have edited over 25 stories so far and I need a new one. So if you need any help just post it in your nest chapter for me to post me e-mail adress if you need it. I will be reading, great luck ^^~~~♥ Wolf
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Reviewed By: iitssmeeagagagagaiinnnnn On: August 13, 2006 19:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
yeah! the real college days are starting! HAHA jk. i have had toooooo much sugar. good chap!
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Title: coolness
Reviewed By: Bri-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 14:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: alakab4m On: August 12, 2006 18:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhh. hope you spice it up later!! i can't wait for you to update this story (: keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2006 14:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a good chapter I like the interaction between Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru. Keep up the great work. Can't wait till the next chapter. HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: alakab4m On: August 09, 2006 23:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi (: this is a really interesting fanfic. i can't wait til you update it. i'll review a lot (; lol
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