| "Family Affairs" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Vegitunks21 On: September 17, 2009 16:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update this is one of the greatest love hina fanfics ever
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Reviewed By: killerman83ca [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2008 13:14 CDT
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Please update soon I can't wait to find out what is goign to happen between the two of them
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Reviewed By: killerman83ca [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2007 13:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read your story and please update soon because I would like to know if they get it on with each other or will something happen with them so please update doon
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Reviewed By: am45 On: September 18, 2006 07:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good story although I see you have left it at the same point as when you posted this on fanfiction.net in February 2005. I do hope there is more to this story.
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Reviewed By: Non_Euclidean_Geometeric_Shape On: September 16, 2006 09:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excelent, although I have some complaints. First off, don't end the last chapter with 'to be continued' and then have the status say 'completed', that's just cruel. Second (as I read vol. 8 & 9 of the manga yesterday) Haruka isn't 7 years older than Keitaro, she's 5 years older. See, Seta came back when he was 30 and Keitaro was 22, since Haruka's 3 years younger than Seta... You get the idea. I don't know why it bugs me, probably because a friend of mine pointed it out to me and I lost the last can of dr pepper over it in a bet that he was wrong. Anyways, DON'T END FICS WITH 'TO BE CONTINUED'!!
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Reviewed By: m64 On: August 23, 2006 12:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, i really like this story so far. But i can't help but feel i've read the idea somewhere before. Deja vu maybe? Anyway, props to ya. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: ballplayer7 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 19:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like the idea of this story, it's interesting.
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Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2006 07:18 CDT
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cool.... *yawn* time to sleep..... i can't believe i let those guys talk me into that.... anyway, before i pass out.... I'd like to say, pretty good chappie..... X_X *passing out*
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Reviewed By: denisud On: August 15, 2006 17:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've alway liked your stories and this is getting more and more intereting. please continue! dennisud
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Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 23:15 CDT
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Good stuff.... Just like a tall cool one after a long day.... or maybe a cancer stick... =p keep it up.....
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Reviewed By: Eric 35 On: August 12, 2006 11:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this on FF since you recently posted this story on MM, does this mean you plan on finishing this story? I certainly do hope so, it is a good story and should be finished. Oh and one last thing, your summary of this story is a lot better then the original summary on FF.
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Reviewed By: Asellus [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2006 01:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoy Haruka fics somewhat. I've never felt that she really had as big an impact or presence in the manga as she could've (Though it wasn't small or anything either). It's nice seeing someone put her in the spotlight. But you do get a little ahead of yourself, too. It was hard not to see the pairing coming the way you gave your summary, and the way the story was written. It was, in a word, expected. But it's nothing too bad. Overall it was a nice, if short, read. I hope the next installment is longer. Way to go on the good fic. Hope things just improve from here. :)
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Reviewed By: AGX [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 14:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good... hope you update soon... its interesting how someone finally put Haruka into the spotlight... keep on going... and adios for now...
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Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2006 22:05 CDT
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Too late for your recomendation, I already have 1-10 in Negima, pretty good stuff too...... And I uinderstand your allergys..... I'm alergic to a few things too..... Like flames, and annoying people i'd love to kill..... erm,.... you weren't supposedto know that....
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