"True Fear" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: Very dark, Reviewed By: HaXx [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2003 04:24 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Exceeeeelent fic. I love the way you have explained Rika's dark past and the truoble in letting him out. The best thing is how two teenage boys are going to deal with this situation. I wonder if Digimon have anything to do with it ./.
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Reviewed By: water On: July 30, 2003 20:19 CDT Comment/Review: This is a good fic please write more. this looks to be a good insight to rika's past and her coldness to every one. said once please keep writing. |
Reviewed By: Ya-Ya On: April 06, 2003 20:43 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: A good story, but what happens next? More chapters, please. |
Reviewed By: ~*Jenruki*~ On: August 21, 2002 19:12 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: hell yeah!!!!!!this is a great fic!!! please write more i cant wait to read the next part!!poor Rika!!wut will happen to her now!!!!keep up the great work!!hehehe
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Reviewed By: mimatogirl On: August 15, 2002 14:46 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: this is a very serious and deep-down fic on how much someone can be hurt. the author must have a very sensitive soul in order to make people beleive this pain. it nearly made me cry when i read it. could you please continue to write? |
Reviewed By: Kuroi Doragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2002 16:04 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: please get more out soon |
Reviewed By: Trunks Serenity Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2002 14:47 CDT Comment/Review: plz write more soon!! |
Reviewed By: Kara [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2002 19:55 CDT Comment/Review: very, very nice--is this really true in the series? I'm just wondering--I thought that I heard her father left, thus the heart-broken shirt... anyways, keep going! It's a pretty good story...
~Kara |
Reviewed By: kklkl On: May 01, 2002 20:44 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10 Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review: its sooo stupied i like rukato |
Reviewed By: Berserk Fury On: April 22, 2002 20:15 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: not a bad story so far. you should really get the next chapter up quick. i haven't really looked into rika's past, but many ppl believe that she was either abused by her father, her mother was abused by her father, or both. anyway, good story. |
Reviewed By: Rika Wong/Akiyama On: June 24, 2002 00:32 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I think this fic is so perfect so far! You're doing such a great job. Update soon please. And one more thing, Henrika soooooo go together, or Ryuki too, but Rukato does not make any sense. I'm so glad someone has a brain around here!! |