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| "Nightmares" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Kitty kiss On: November 22, 2014 09:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
The idea is good, however, you could have fixed your spelling and
grammar. Also, have you seen the after effects of rape? This story
could have had a WAY better lemon and Kagome forgives him so
easily. This story while entertaining to a certain level, lacks
detail and fluid transitions from one event to the next. This story
deserves better, but YOU deserve better.
| Reviewed By: mrskcgoodman [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 13:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
First I would like to thank you for reviewing my story, that meant a lot to me. I liked it, I truely did. The flow went a little fast for me but I am a sucker for happy endings and Kag and Sess pairings. I hope you continue to write and I will continue to review. Nice work can wait for the next fic. Ciao
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