Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 08:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice, as much to make the evil boredom go away to write as read. Perhaps their could've been a little more imagery as to how their suroundings look. Surroundings often determine a mood for a big part. I liked about the story that Ryou wasn't the typical giggly, blushing girl-on-sugar-high kind of character. You see that too often these days. Bakura too, was well done for a small one-shot. A tad too...sweet...I supose, but still relatively in character. Especially the way he analyzes things and the bit about 'patience' showed this well. The one thing that does annoy a bit is the whole disembodied-spirit being half real thing and all. Their is no indication in Yugioh that Yami and Bakura can touch anything in spirit form (if they could, what would they need hosts for, after all) so it should be all-spirit or all-body, for the lasts some excuses can be found. The best one I've seen so far had to do with the gods granting him a body of his own. Just a hint
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