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Title: Thumbs up!
Reviewed By: vegeta's_chew_toy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2011 00:23 EST
Comment/Review:
Tee hee, * sings in McDonald voice* I'm lovin' it! Goku is so very sexy in this! Heh. |
Title: ^/////^
Reviewed By: schwarzsturm On: October 29, 2007 18:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I already left a review for this story on ff.net, but the lecher in me couldn't resist reading the uncensored version XD ! Your story is very unique, and I came to like the B/G pairing, because I only read B/V stories before (and got tired of them). It's nice how you include some details from the original series (which I actually happen to love more than DBZ). Gawd, I read this story twice in a row already (now, it's not because I'm THAT lecherous, it's because there's so much suspense, I think). I hope you did not put this story on hiatus, so I'm looking forward to the next chapter. There will be one, won't there? Pretty please?
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Title: omgwtfbbq!! Haha, I mean...great story XD!
Reviewed By: oo-Jynxed-oo On: September 05, 2007 03:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic so far! Please update when you get the urge! Your style of writing is very unique. You have a knack for character intereactions and description. I could see the entire situation play out in my head as if I were watching t.v. =D! I'm also an big fan of Goku/Bulma pairings ;) Update! XD!!
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Reviewed By: MizuSasuke [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 01:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh why? WHY WON'T U UPDATE?! You can't just abandon a good story like that! I won't let you!!!!!!!! Groan! Agghhhh! Nooooo!!!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: MizuSasuke On: February 26, 2007 14:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is like nothing I've ever read before. The suspense is litarally killing me; it is really very exciting. I've never seen Goku like that, (I've only read VB fics), but this is a more enjoyable coz of Goku's sweet personality and his (ignorance?). The writing is superb. I could never write like that. Keep it up!
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Title: why!?
Reviewed By: Zarahai On: February 25, 2007 23:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fanfic! different than the vegeta/bulma things and the innocent goku theme, but WHY LET HER SUCCUM!!!!!! so much interestin the other way T.T.....
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Title: XD
Reviewed By: mynameisevile [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2007 00:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holy son of a bitch, i love this fic!! i've always wondered when someone was ever going to write a g/b fic, and i love how u portray goku... he's so... evil like... i love evil people!! update please??!! XD
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Title: wonderful
Reviewed By: verogoku On: November 30, 2006 09:14 EST
Comment/Review:
Wow, your new chapter is still better than the chapter 3. I love it. Goku and Bulma are so good together. I love your story and I wait the next chapter with eagerness.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 14:08 EST
Comment/Review:
write more!!! I love it.
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Title: go ahead
Reviewed By: verogoku On: November 10, 2006 12:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fanfic especially the way Goku is in this story and also the couple Goku/Bulma.I'm afraid that there weren't more story about them like that.Obviously I love Bulma and Vegeta but I find Goku/Bulma more surprising and so interesting in fanfics. I can't wait for more Goku/Bulma (with Goku out of control).
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Reviewed By: caro On: November 02, 2006 20:34 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DUDE THIS IS LIKE REALLY GOOD U SHOULD REALLY UPDATE!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: baught On: November 02, 2006 02:40 EST
Comment/Review:
it's very good,just keep up with the updates. Don't let a good story lose its heat with prolonged updates.
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Reviewed By: jay17 On: November 02, 2006 01:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, I really wanna see how she gets out of it.
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Reviewed By: jetset6 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2006 18:26 EDT
Comment/Review:
MOOOOOOOOOOOREEE!
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Title: Vegetagirl
Reviewed By: veggiefan On: August 31, 2006 16:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You evil bitch!!! You left us on an unforgiving cliff hanger!!!! I hate you!!!!! Other than that I love the story and I hope that you write more soon!!!! please like monday? Please?
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