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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: MizuSasuke On: February 26, 2007 14:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is like nothing I've ever read before. The suspense is litarally killing me; it is really very exciting. I've never seen Goku like that, (I've only read VB fics), but this is a more enjoyable coz of Goku's sweet personality and his (ignorance?). The writing is superb. I could never write like that. Keep it up!
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Title: why!?
Reviewed By: Zarahai On: February 25, 2007 23:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fanfic! different than the vegeta/bulma things and the innocent goku theme, but WHY LET HER SUCCUM!!!!!! so much interestin the other way T.T.....
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Title: XD
Reviewed By: mynameisevile [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2007 00:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holy son of a bitch, i love this fic!! i've always wondered when someone was ever going to write a g/b fic, and i love how u portray goku... he's so... evil like... i love evil people!! update please??!! XD
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Title: wonderful
Reviewed By: verogoku On: November 30, 2006 09:14 EST
Comment/Review:
Wow, your new chapter is still better than the chapter 3. I love it. Goku and Bulma are so good together. I love your story and I wait the next chapter with eagerness.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 14:08 EST
Comment/Review:
write more!!! I love it.
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Title: go ahead
Reviewed By: verogoku On: November 10, 2006 12:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fanfic especially the way Goku is in this story and also the couple Goku/Bulma.I'm afraid that there weren't more story about them like that.Obviously I love Bulma and Vegeta but I find Goku/Bulma more surprising and so interesting in fanfics. I can't wait for more Goku/Bulma (with Goku out of control).
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Reviewed By: caro On: November 02, 2006 20:34 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DUDE THIS IS LIKE REALLY GOOD U SHOULD REALLY UPDATE!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: baught On: November 02, 2006 02:40 EST
Comment/Review:
it's very good,just keep up with the updates. Don't let a good story lose its heat with prolonged updates.
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Reviewed By: jay17 On: November 02, 2006 01:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, I really wanna see how she gets out of it.
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Reviewed By: jetset6 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2006 18:26 EDT
Comment/Review:
MOOOOOOOOOOOREEE!
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Title: Vegetagirl
Reviewed By: veggiefan On: August 31, 2006 16:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You evil bitch!!! You left us on an unforgiving cliff hanger!!!! I hate you!!!!! Other than that I love the story and I hope that you write more soon!!!! please like monday? Please?
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2006 10:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great, i love it when goku lets loose... please update soon..
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Reviewed By: Orchideater [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 04:57 EDT
Comment/Review:
*delicious shudder* I do so love it when Goku gets out of control. "Not yelling at Goku is virtually impossible." lol That's so Bulma, trying her best to stay calm but losing it anyway. Good for Piccolo, trying to warn her about the situation, even if it looks like that won't help her in the end. Bring on the lemons!
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Reviewed By: Orchideater [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 03:23 EDT
Comment/Review:
A naughty G/B fic, eh? Sounds fun.^^ I haven't seen one of those in ages and ages. Right now I feel angry at Chichi for victimizing an innocent woman, but also I feel sorry for her since she's so afraid and anxious that she feels she has to go to such lengths. I look forward to seeing what you'll do with this fic!
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Title: Cute!
Reviewed By: The B On: August 12, 2006 06:32 EDT
Comment/Review:
This is really starting out nice. I'm interested in reading more and finding out what is in store for poor Bulma! Chi-Chi didn't want to spend 7 days in happy land with Goku?? Is she insane!!?? LOL! Anyway, great start. I look forward to more.
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