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| "Fenrir and the Fox" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Zvohunter On: May 15, 2007 07:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice story, but you are focusing too much on Jinra. More Naruto etc. Story needs more updates or longer chapters.
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 15:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmmm, from one phoenix to another, I gotta say, this story is pretty cool. Jinra is turning into a pretty neat character, and one with a lot of growth potential. Not to mention being able to kick Sasuke down a couple pegs, instead of being the utter jackass he is in, well, everything. In the long term, I like this story, and look forward to future chapters. Keep up the good work.
| Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 15:15 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think your focusing around your OC to much. That is pretty much all I have to say. If you stop doing that, people won't lose intrest. Make the Chapters longer by the way.
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