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Reviewed By: shawnamm1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2007 00:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
are you going to ever finish this one? I apoligive if I'm being rude, but I just wondering.
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Title: Hi
Reviewed By: Saia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2007 21:47 CST
Comment/Review:
Anyone else going to coment or do u guys just not like it anymore.....??????? You'll have to leave some coments before i add on lol laters....
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Title: Waz Up Sis
Reviewed By: KittKittKat On: December 20, 2006 15:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo Saia Send Me Your Shit And I'll Look It All Over Iight And Yo Therez No Way In Hell Sakura Looks Like A Hooker. There Is Different Styles Of Dressing And Everything Just Because Shes Wearing A Jacket And Mini Skirt Dun Mean Shit This Story's Fucking Awesome. Different Goths Dress Differently Then Others I Personally Like That Way Reflects Me A Lil Peace Out Much Luv.
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Title: Saia Here
Reviewed By: Saia [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2006 19:12 CST
Comment/Review:
HiHIHIHIHI srry i havnt updated i have been having some rlly hard things right now but it will be done by dec.17 promise..... i am on the last paragraph..... i had to start from scratch. Anywho lots of love lol update coming soon..... laters.......... Saia
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Title: O_o
Reviewed By: Randi On: October 22, 2006 15:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well... where do I start? First off, I think you REALLY need to work on your spelling and grammar. Perhaps a beta could be of some use, no? I really think you have a good story going on, BUT... you include sentences WITHIN very long paragraphs. I think you need to seperate them a bit, and like I said before, you could always ask for a beta or something, to help you with spelling and grammar and the way you write/type out your paragraphs. Aside from that, it was rather enjoyable... just... work on your spelling/grammar/punctuation/paragraphs, and you'll be set! ;)
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Title: Yo
Reviewed By: HIIIIIIII On: October 06, 2006 19:28 CDT
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Its comeing and its funny!!!!!! rlly funny i promise and im trying iv had a lot of problems but im up and running again so comeing very veyr soon i promise!!!!!! Siai
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Title: life
Reviewed By: tenten again! On: October 04, 2006 11:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CMON! IVE BEEN WAITING FOR LIKE FOREVER AND A DAY!PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Hi everyone
Reviewed By: Saia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2006 18:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
the next one might take mo longer then expected..... i came down with a viruse and had to get my computer whiped....we asked them to save everything but he didnt save my 2 files witch had 3 years of work and pics and movies annime music everything including all of my work on Life i will try my best to recover from whats happened and fix it.... if not i will right one....... dose anyone have any ideas or think they know what comes next? if so you can e-mail me at Saia-Blade@hotmail.com see ya later Saia!!!!! thanx for all the reviews...... bye i will try my best........
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Title: life
Reviewed By: Tenten lovin neji On: September 25, 2006 10:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok ok im just so clueless at the moment! what the hell does lemons mean!??!?!?!?! please tell me wahahahahahah
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Title: Life
Reviewed By: Tenten On: September 21, 2006 11:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IT WAS SO FREAKIN AWESOME I DEMAND THAT U WRITE THE NEXT ONE AND FAST CAUSE I WANT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENENS NEXT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!IT IS SO FREAKIN ADDICTING PLEASE DONT TAKE FOREVER BUT DONT MAKE IT HALF FAST NIETHR K! CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE -TENTEN &hearts neji
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Title: Hey everyone
Reviewed By: Saia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2006 20:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi everyone this is Saia, im sorry for how long it is taking me to update it will be on by this weekend i promise.....i have had some problems and delays.....but it only needs editing now. and will be posted soon. Saia
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 17:20 CDT
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I really cannot believe Sasuke would do that to Sakura, but either way I realy love this story. Good Job!!!!!
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Reviewed By: fLcL_FFx_lovr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 22:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i agree with narutoroxmysox. sakura sounded like a striper or hooker or somthing, but besides that it is a really great storyline. update!!!
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Reviewed By: NarutoRoxMySox [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey.. you copied me! When Gaara licked Sakura's lip begging for entrance! That's what I did with Sakura and Sasuke! Copy cat!!! Grr!!! But.. you said it in your own words.. so I gotta give you that atleast! Yay for you! Your story is great so far I love it! I don't care if you did copy me or not, your story is awesome! Go you! Keep updating.. so I don't die!
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Reviewed By: yuki bozu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 14:08 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice Story. =) Update ASAP! Oh and check your spelling for the names of the ppl
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