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| "Life" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Title: she dose
Reviewed By: Jelly [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 01:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it but I have to agree with NarutoRoxMySox she dose look like a hooker.
| Title: Great Job UPDATE!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: NarutoRoxMySox [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 11:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this. It's so interesting. I think Gaara and Sakura is a great couple. Oh and the whole jacket thing with Sakura.. Ehh.. that sucked. She should be wearing something better. Like a shirt with the grim reaper on it. And some black jeans. Or something like that. The jacket and mini skirt, she didn't seem like a bad ass, she seemed like a hooker.. I understand that you are trying to make her seem like a bad ass, but you didn't.. you made her look like a hooker! Did you want her to seem goth? Or something? If so, do what I said, the grim thingy and black jeans. Simple. Anyways, I loved your story, just didn't like how Sakura dressed... But great job with everything else!!!!!!! Can't wait til' next chapter!
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