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| "The Love Between Brother and Sister" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: Jehuty Zero [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 16:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved the fic. Keep it up. i'd give you an even higher rating if it were possible!
| Reviewed By: Tjay Motou [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 18:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There were some spelling and grammar errors, however they did not take away from the overall beauty of this fic. My only problem is with the detail... but I'm sure I'll live. I liked it, and I'll be keeping an eye out if you decide to to write more of this wonderfully sweet pairing. Good Job.
| Reviewed By: XXXHeieXXXXX On: September 14, 2006 22:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this story plz review some more^-^
| Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2006 12:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
You know, usually I highly dislike the incest fics, but in your story, Hiei and Yukina, despite sharing the blood, don't ... how to put it?... A reader hasn't a feeling they are siblings (hope, you understood what I meant), thus, allowing to read your fic as a *normal* love story. So, I'll be waiting for the next chapter^_^ Cheers!
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