Reviewed By: cory On: August 23, 2006 07:25 CDT Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: i enjoyed the story it was good and i think he blood line limit should be...uh...um...still thinking...ok im lost...............WAIT I HAVE AN IDEA wait no i lost it...>_< DAMN IM STRAINING MY BRAIN...............maybe...uh...make...her...uh...be able...to...I KNO MAKE HER CONTROL SHADOWS I MEAN NOT LIKE SHIKAMARU I MEAN LIKE ABLE TO DO WAT SHE WANTS WITH THEM...no wait...i dont kno...WAIT i think u should have her be able to make creatures out of shadows or light...huh?...huh?...do u like the idea...well that was a stupid question if u liked it u would use it and i would see oh and have her naruto try to protect her and he would nearly die and then she finds she could use her blood line limit... what ever the limit is going to be...but i hope i gave u some ideas love the story line : ) : ) 2 thumbs up.
