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| "Fallen Embers" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: hellagood#1 On: October 27, 2003 18:09 CST
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I love the fic!!! this is great and there sould really be a kxk here!!!! I think age so does not matter as long it is not like 20 years apart but i think 11 is fine so PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Akane-chan2 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2002 20:21 CDT
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Am I the first person to review this??!! O_O;;; Wow...I have to say..this is good.^^ You mentioned a lot of things in the story in which I agree upon. Tatoeba... like the reasons why Kenshin wouldn't love her. Ya know, like the age gap, and stuff. Mou...they are ELEVEN years apart, dang it!! I don't care if it didn't matter back then; it still is alot. Too much if you ask me. THINK about it! If Kenshin was 18 then Kaoru would be...er...7...O_o;;;; Oro........kowaii... I, myself think that Kaoru doesn't deserve Kenshin (I don't know if you agree to THAT...but..er...yeah....). Kenshin deserves someone who's like Tomoe...a girl that he can totally relate to. Sure, I think it's cute-looking when Kenshin and Kaoru fight and when those so-called "romantic" moments ensue....shikashi...in my POV, it's more of a brotherly/sisterly love that they're sharing in those "romantic" moments. As for the fighting...don't ALL siblings fight like that? ::sweatdrops:: When Kenshin and Kaoru hugged each other before Kenshin left for Kyoto, my sister walked in and assumed they were brothers and sisters and that they were finally caring for each other or something like that (like apologizing after a fight or something....she's only walked in on episodes where Kaoru knocks the lights outta Kenshin...@@;;;. She never watched RK mind you, and she has never been interested either OO;;;) She is totally off, obviously...::sweatdrops::...but it just shows, now doesn't it? Wakaranai wa yo...Kenshin and Kaoru....if they were siblings...that'd be SOO cute. (I just wished Kenshin wasn't so lecture-y at times; whenever he lectures at Kaoru or something, it ends up him sounding like a father towards her >>;;; [Now THAT idea, I would agree with everyone else, is totally screwed]). Anyway, I think I'm talking too much right now...Oo;;; Umm...I want you to post the next chapter de gozaru!! ^_^ Gambatte!! | Reviewed By: DFourthHorseman [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2002 21:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Definitely Kenshin is OOC, by a lot I think. But I think its a great reason for her to go to the past, but I hope you really tone down on the angst stuff. I really this can be a great story, and I hope you continue. Good luck ne. |
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