| "Like a Disease" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: Hmm....
Reviewed By: TaintedShikonShards [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was definitly surprised at the AlxRoy pairing in the first chapter, but once I read it, it wasn't so bad, or unreasonable I guess. Then with chapter two and Ed's reappearence...I wondered where it would go from there. I'm sure if I like Roy in this role, or not, but theres really only one way to find out and that's if you keep writing. An update would be nice...but since this story hasn't been updated since August of last year...I'm not holding my breath. THough if you get a chance to write more along this story line...I'd be sure to read it.
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Reviewed By: vincents_lover_ffall [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 07:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
um...Im really confused...what's going on?
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Title: hhmmm
Reviewed By: Jelly [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2006 00:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
when i realized who was going down on roy I had to stop and think... If you'ed have told me that you were going to write a fic a bout al and roy I would have said that grose but after i read it I kinda liked it. good job I think....
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