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Reviewed By: mcdgoddess On: September 28, 2008 11:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the update!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2008 15:44 PDT
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poor sessy, i think it would be best if kaede came to them and fast.
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2008 14:29 PDT
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i still can't accept the physical changes, but i love the way the story is going. you're building conflicts all over the place, and then miroku says there's not much time for trouble to happen. that means that it's really going to hit the fan that night, doesn't it? thanks for another great chapter.
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2008 03:14 PDT
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i love your story. part of the reason i've been drawn to it was the diametrically oppositional natures of inuyasha and sesshoumaru. now, with the coming of age, you are giving them a parity that isn't what i was looking for. the changes that inuyasha went through have changed his characterization, in my mind at least. i will continue to read and enjoy this srtory, though.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2008 16:19 PDT
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thank you for the update. little shippo worrying about if sess will love him is so cute, but i'm starting to wonder when kouga will get up the nerve to talk to miroku.
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2008 04:17 PDT
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this was one of the most sensual chapters i've ever read. i loved the lust trance! you wove such an emotional piece with your words. thank you
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Title: giving it as go as you got
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 20:13 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL you know I thought about Shgure-san When I was reading the parts with Tibade I was like he reminds me of Takara his mate is barren like Sango and he has a wonderful spirt like Takara even if he's more open. So now you have to finish the tale the whole thing. and would the inu boy reaction to it if there not busy ahem lol. Be funny if Inuyasha tired out the great lord himself lol. docile indeed. Now inuyasha just have to get through with telling sesshomaru about the bond. poor puppy or should I say happy face lol. this is just getting way too good.
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Title: you've made so happy
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 18:39 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Here I am in my apt. that gets no wifi and i do. waiting all day for some one to update and you do. I'm so freakin happy u don't understand and this chapter was just way to funny and lemony goodness. just because they can't have sex doesn't mean they can't do stuff. lol and boy was it good I couldn't laughing my butt off. I have to tell ya I have become quite a fan of Tibade's he's very funny or at least you make him out to be. lol I have to go back a reread this chapter it was that good. Oh do you hang out on gaia? baibai for now update soon
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Title: HIYA
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2008 13:47 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
soo sorry it took me so long to friend you I didn't know who you were and I haven't been on myspace for a while lol. yeah a new chapter soon cause I had a good laugh with the others even though I'm too darn lazy to update anymore sigh sorry about that. But I have been reading and just been so excite with each chapter. I lol my butt of when I Sesshomaru reacted the way he did . good thing the wolf was there hmm. Is there love blooming in the air with Sango and the healer??? maybe he can help in some magical demon was for her to be able to have children. Oh and lets not for get the baka Kagome hope a ton of guilt is in it for her keh baka she's worst than Kikyou. any way I really do like how the story between Inuyasha and Sesshomaru turning out they have there ups and downs like any couple. The love the way you ended the last chapter so sweet. Sesshy a spoil prince maybe he's not that grown up after all. ok I this I've taken up enough space hope to see more of Inuyasha new powers. wait we need another heavy petting session with our favorite inu's plz puppy eyes ( look there starting to water.) lol have a good one.
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Title: so excited
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 09:47 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man I'm telling you. your just exciting me with these wonderful update!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I had to go back to chapter one to reread to understand some of the stuff going on and I'm like oh yeah I remember that! lol as alway I hate kagome ler suffer and these almost lemon are kill in me. Inuyasha new power is so cool I can't wait to read more updates so without me being rude UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol hugs
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Reviewed By: wolfluv [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 02:15 PDT
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I cannot thank you enough for sharing this fantastic story with us!!! your writing style and imagination thrills me to no end another excelent chapter please grace us with more! THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!!!!
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2008 03:13 PDT
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at least miroku is clear on where inuyasha's affections are. i laughed at the scene where miroku could hear inuyasha's thoughts. i do hope kouga tells miroku, soon. i love the pace and the chapter length in this story. it keeps the feeling fresh and alive. i still enjoy the pov switches. you handle it well. it helps the story be more complete. not many authors could handle it without it being confusing. thank you for another great chapter.
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2008 04:52 PDT
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now some of the confusion is being cleared up. i loved the tender moments between inuyasha and sesshoumaru. you expressed the emotions so well in your writings. miroku feels lost and alone now, as does kouga. but i don't imagine it will be long before they are together. and now sango has a new interest in her life, even if she can't see it yet. i love where this is going. thank you for a wonderful chapter.
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Reviewed By: yashandkag4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2008 15:23 PDT
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i am strangly attracted to this bizarre phenominon(sp?) that is your story. i normally don't like yaoi. it makes me feel so uncomfortable and is too weird for me. but something about yours makes me want to keep going. wow, i'm so perverted. i like your writing style and your story even if seeing all these guys as couples creeps me out. keep up the good work. update soon.
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2008 04:23 PDT
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so, now that sesshoumaru knows how kouga feels about miroku, i can just picture the great lord of the west playing matchmaker. i love you writing style. i love seeing the same scene from different points of view. there were a couple of verb tense mistakes, but not enough to slow down the feel of the story. great job, and i look forward to the next chapter
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