| "Falling Away" Reviews/Comments [ 68 ] |
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 01:56 PDT
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wow, 2 chapters in one day. and there was so much going on in each chapter. it was so much fun reading miroku and inuyasha being able to hear each other's thoughts. but now the emotional stage is even more crowded! my poor brain in befuddled with geometric patterns. are there two triangles--one with inuyasha, miroku and kouga and one with inuyasha, miroku and sesshoumaru, or one square? or it could even be a circle with inuyasha at the center and sango, miroku, kouga and sesshoumaru revolving around him. thank you for all the time and effort you have put into this wonderful story!
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Reviewed By: SakeNaru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 15:24 PDT
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I hope Inuyasha lives but it so sad about the whole inu miroku kouga thing... but I want to read more!!! Update when you get the chance
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2008 14:15 PDT
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miroku finally opens up to inuyasha. now there are hard choices to make, aren't there? i loved the way inuyasha's personality came through at the end of the chapter. i love the sarcastic side of him. this is turning into a very deep emotional ride, and i enjoyed every moment of it. thank you for this wonderful chapter
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Reviewed By: Isis191 On: January 26, 2008 09:00 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has been my favorite story since I first found it here and on FanFiction. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful and well thought out tale.
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Reviewed By: BelovedEllie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2007 04:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg!....i luv this chappie!...it's os awesome...but no mating?????!!!!!NOOOOOOOO!...o well...i luv it anyway....hope 2 c an update and sum smut soon!^^
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Title: i luv it!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: BelovedEllie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 17:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i luved it!!!!...i hope 2 c a lemon or sum smut in the next chappie b/c i'll be luving it even more...o and i started a fic...plz o check it out and tell me wat u think about it...my very 4st fic evr...hope u like that as much as i luv this:)
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 04:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story, and the way you are telling it. not many authors can keep switching the point of view, and still keep the flow of a story. you have kept everyone in character so well. even kagome. while the basic personality is changing, she still shows signs of the kagome we all know. i spent all my free time this weekend getting caught up on this story, and it wasn't wasted time. i thoroughly enjoyed every minute, and i would like to thank you for the enjoyment it gave me
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Reviewed By: grace317 On: September 11, 2007 21:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohmygod i feel all fluffy inside!THAT WAS SO CUTE!!! the reason i gave a 9 for spelling and grammar was because there were a few errors, though. poor miroku..i wonder if kouga has the hots for him :S
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2007 20:45 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Glad you updated. I hope you get another hapter up soon!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 15:15 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my God that is so true I love this story please update soon I can't wait to see what happens when they all ined out will thewre be a tree some or will m. be left out...?
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 13:56 PDT
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this chapter was sooo funny!! i loved it! keep up the good work & update soon plz.
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Reviewed By: gen50 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 08:32 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
drats that rating... i clicked 10 out of 10, why is it showing 7 out of 10!!!! i enjoyed this chapter and put overall rating as 10 out of 10 so please ignore the rating in the prev review, okay. good thing i checked....
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Reviewed By: gen50 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 08:30 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
that chapter was sweet (for sessxinu fans, that is).. finally... they can be together. i like the way you developed the affection, and i like their concerns - it's so legitimate and IC for them both! i am so looking forward to the next chapter.. when we get the explanations for all the 'shit' as inu puts it...
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 13:21 PDT
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good chapter. the ending was a bit funny. i cant wait for the next chapter. update soon plz.
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Reviewed By: Tai-san On: May 31, 2007 21:05 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome new chapter. What the hell is Sessho doing? And Jaken is a little bastard. But yeah anyways thanks for the update. Can't wait to see more thanks for posting best wishes and good waves.
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