| "A Lonely Soul" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: blaboy On: September 07, 2004 10:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update please.... This is a pretty good story with a superb plot..... There were some unusual events such as Akane writing about herself in both first person and third person point of view.......
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Reviewed By: Phoneix On: May 31, 2004 23:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the idea for this fic. Please keep going.
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Reviewed By: Aseram On: February 09, 2004 15:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a interesting story, please keep going whith this.
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Reviewed By: Elysium and Lonely Soul [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 13:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lonely Soul: Yeah! Your story actually had a second chapter! ^_^ You know, I've first read the first chapter on ff.net & loved it, so I really hope you UPDATE RIGHT FECK'N NOW! x_o And while you're at it, update all your stories on fanfiction.net too! :p PLEASE?! T_T I think you're the best Ranma AU writer! ^_~ Okay, bye bye for now. ;p
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Title: OMFG!!! 8O
Reviewed By: compman44 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 12:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can I say something? WOW. I gave this fic a 10, because, well... there was no 11 on the scale. Rarely (not to say never) have I seen a fanfic author put so much detail, so much emotion, so much depth into a story. And it certainly helps that it's based on one of the greatest manga/anime I've seen. =D PLEASE keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Joe On: April 08, 2003 13:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow.This fic is really great.I mean, the way it is set up is perfect.From the summary I thought i was gonna be a boring fic.Was I wrong!Keep writing more.Hope there is more to come! |
Reviewed By: Sayiera [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 05:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good start! I really hope you will continue this story, because I want to know how it ends! |
Reviewed By: Saberwulfe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2002 18:14 CST
Comment/Review:
Well, I was just wondering how much longer until you update 'A silent warrior', or 'A lonely soul'? Both are excellent fics, but both desperately require some updating, ASAP! Anywho, I'm just hopin that you update soon. |
Reviewed By: elisteran [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2002 22:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
A few grammar/spelling problems, but very readable. If the twins are 6 years old, would they really remember their father at all by this point? |
Reviewed By: zzzzzz On: August 16, 2002 01:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have a question Mr. tendo and Mr. satome had known each other befor and had talked about the arranged marrage when they were training under happi so suon should know the name satome being one of his only friends and all (a real nut buster on this one you should try to know the past befor you change things!!!)!!!:P |
Reviewed By: Vkasu On: July 23, 2002 08:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is actually the best "another universe" story I've read on Ranma since today. I hope to read what will follow soon. I'm not getting patient when I like something so much. |
Reviewed By: EchoE On: April 17, 2002 21:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed chapter 1 of this fanfic. The second chapter, perhaps due to great expectations, did not have the same tempo.
Nevertheless, I hope you will continue. |
Reviewed By: C. Rose On: April 17, 2002 06:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll have to admit that it is really hard to make good ratings from me, but you did it. I really like this story and hope to see a lot more of it, I remember reading the first chapter some time back and was wondering if you would get anymore out. Keep up the good work and lets see some more of this.
^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Dark_Phoenix_of_Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2002 14:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this fic, many times before on your site, and started wondering if you'd ever up date it...I love the Idea portrail, PLEASE CONTINUE |
