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| "New Yorks Meets Japan" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 12:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi, it's me again. Sorry about the first review. When I put in the 'how are you' part I hit enter, thinking it would skip down to the next line which it did when I was writing the review. But when I read it after I submited it it showed up like you see it. So I just want to apologize. So just ignore the 'how are you i'm fine' part, please. It's a great story. Please continue with it. P.S. You might think I'm crazy for reviewing my review, but I'm not. I think. lol Please update soon! Sorry again.
| Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 11:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a good plot. I really like it. But I was getting confussed while I was reading it because all the dialogue was put together and I didn't know who was talking sometimes. Just a tip but try seperating it like this: "Hi, how are you?" "I'm fine." I'm not trying to sound snobby or mean, I'm sorry if I sound like it. I'm just trying to help. But it's a good story. Keep writing it. Please update soon.
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