| "Castle of Inutaishou: Brothers First Time" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Castle of Inutaishou: Brothers First Time
Reviewed By: Sexy sesshy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 02:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
way to go hun I'm glad I get to help u with it I love u*kisses u deeply and rubs ur cock*
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Title: What?
Reviewed By: Sexy Inu's Security On: August 14, 2006 22:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, hasn't ur mother ever told u that if u don't have anything nice to say u shouldn't say anything at all besides I don't take kindly to flamers. *barks at flamers* Love it or leave it alone. I love it *winks* Official Security for Sexy Inu
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Reviewed By: lasting_impression On: August 14, 2006 16:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
er its okay
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Reviewed By: Lexbubble [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 16:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the new chapter babe. Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter. Love u much Mommy
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Reviewed By: Wolf_godess On: August 14, 2006 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT, KEEP WRITTING!!!! ok, Now, I love it so far, very good! I would love if you made the chapter a little longer...and also maybe inuyasha not so...girly. But do not make him domitnate, keep him subbsive. I love it thus far, keep wirtting!
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