| "Sesshy's Special Day" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: just passing by On: June 15, 2007 09:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
sucks
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Title: I thought I warned you!!
Reviewed By: Sexy Inu's Security [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2006 14:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well, well...it obvious that someone can't read very well cause I know that I said that there would be no flaming here. Now u have gone and pissed me off Scarlet Bitch, I mean Witch...what's the difference. I told u this was his first attempt but u still choose to be an ass about it. Well if u come back with ur nasty reviews ur gonna make me snap and I'm being nice right now so u don't really wanna piss me off. Either give him advice that can help him or leave him alone you baka kusoyarou. And if u dont know what that means I said u were a stupid( u look up the rest...and it's japanese by the way) Don't leave another flame again...better yet just don't leave another review period. Sexy Inu's Security watchin out for Sexy Sesshy on Sexy Inu's behalf so fuck off!!
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Reviewed By: The_ScarletWitch On: August 19, 2006 12:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was a piece of crap. You didnt take time with anything and were way to repetitive. Learn how to write and THEN come back to this site.
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Title: Nice but...
Reviewed By: Kiten Kaiba On: August 18, 2006 09:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK, I really don't want this to sound like a flame, but I have a few suggestions. 1. Please use " " when they're speaking; it's very confusing if you don't 2. Please look into paragraphing, your stories; it looks neater 3. Got to love a good pwp, but this left much to be desired. It makes me want to do a rewrite of it on my own, it's a really good story; just next time put a little more detail and structure into your work okay? 4. Please don't take this as a flame; I'm only trying to help make a good story out of a great idea.
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Title: FLAMERS BEWARE!!
Reviewed By: Sexy Inu's Security [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 09:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
As you can see flamers will not be tolerated. This is his first fanfic so if you have nothing nice or constructive to say then don't say anything...got it!! Cause then you have to deal with me *barks and growls at flamers* Just thought I'd warn you *smirks* Sexy Inu's Security watching out for Sexy Sesshy at Sexy Inu's request. Flamers watch your back...
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Reviewed By: Lexbubble [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 08:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think this is good for your first time babe. Everyone gave you good tips to use for developing your skills so all I have to say is keep up the good work. Love u babe Mom
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Title: Nice Fic
Reviewed By: Sexy Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice sexy ryu baby but i agree with everyone else on this you do need a few more changes but other then that you good enough to write stories with me ok i love you sexy baby *rubs ur groin*
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Reviewed By: Dark_Lady_69 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
u need to use ""'s and slow things down. other than that is good for a first try =^.^=
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Reviewed By: biggmike45 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey ryu I agree with koumyou and her sexy self lol yeah it needs to be longer but since it's your first fan fic it was great you'll get better in no time bye bye
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Reviewed By: Lady-Rin-69 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 18:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
hay there ryu, it was ok but next time make it longer alright? anywho good work byez your friend Lady-Rin-69 (Koumyou)
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