| "The Moon Village" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Black Rose317 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2006 20:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
yeah i was tired and bored it was something quick
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Reviewed By: Bio Uotani [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2006 12:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice story alittle choppy though. But please countinue. I like it alot.
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Reviewed By: Dark Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2006 06:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ok, read your story first before posting it.A idea is Sasuke and the rude guy fight. I have a question. Will Sasuke go back to Konaha?
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Reviewed By: Dark Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 16:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's good. But is the story about Sasuke?
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