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| "Sexy Boy" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Tyrical [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2006 23:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chocolate, splurging on Jimmy Choo's, and this story all qualify as guilty pleasures. The ability to make such a serious thing into a mind melting orgasam is serious talent. It tore me to bits that the events of the story was turning me on in the worst waay. That even though I knew it was wrong, so very wrong, it still had everything in to just turn me on and just use the other hand to page down. (Does this make me a bad person?) I ususally just troll or lurk but anything that is this powerful I have to comment. This piece was brilliant and making you feel so many differnt things. The good, the bad, and the ugly. You've bravely delved into a serious thing and was able to show all sides of it and draw the reader into a place that forces you to realize nothing is ever black or white. For every right there is a wrong. For every power that is given one is taken away. Also reminding us that there are times when innocence is stolen. You rule!
| Title: Sexy Boy
Reviewed By: vegetagirl2 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2006 14:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would give you a 100 if I could, but they dont have that rating. this story is gorgeous!
| Reviewed By: vegetagirl2 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2006 14:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'M STUNNED!!!! HOW COULD NOBODY REVIEW SUCH A DELICIOUSLY SEXY, PERVERTED STORY? THIS STORY, I THINK IS THE CREME OF THE MEDIAMINER CROP, I THINK I READ THIS STORY SOMEWHERE ELSE, THIS STORY, IS BLISTERINGLY, UNBELIEVABLY HOT!!!!! I'VE NEVER READ ANYTHING SO HOT IN MY LIFE!!!!!!! YOUR PERFECT!!!!!! I DONT BELIEVE NO ONE REVIEWED THIS AND HAD THE NERVE TO REVIEW ALL THE OTHER STORIES THAT WERENT AS GOOD. SOME PEOPLE JUST DONT KNOW A GOOD STORY WHEN THE SEE ONE!!!! I'M STILL IN AWE I DIDNT KNOW THIS STORY WOULD BE HERE STILL AND I WANTED TO REVIEW, YOU SHOULD POST THIS ON AFF.NET IF YOU ALREADY HAVENT. YOUR TOO GOOD NOT TO SPREAD THIS STORY!!!!!! I CANT TELL YOU HOW HOT THIS STORY WAS, HOT ISNT EVEN THE WORD, WEBSTER'S HASNT EVEN CREATED A WORD FOR THIS STORY!!!! PLEASE KEEP WRITING MORE LIKE THIS AND IF ITS ALRIGHT WITH YOU, I'D LIKE TO SEE YOU TAKE A TRY AT SHOTA, OR MALE/MALE INCEST. DBZ PLEASE!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Orchideater [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 15:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg. Oh wow. That was just so... OMG! That was fantastically hot, and I'm usually not a fan of the GhxT pairing. It made me a little nervous at first, the adult driving a teenager into a secluded area to do *things* to him, but Gohan was never pushy or threatening, Trunks was very willing, and Trunks is powerful enough to blast out of the car and fly home if he didn't like it, so it was okay, heh. I loved Trunks acting like a typical teenage brat, complaining about Gohan's car and clothes and clipping coupons, then being taken to task as the nerdy veneer was stripped away to reveal the hot sexy saiyan beast underneath, that would enslave his heart. Damn that was hot! All the details of the lemon: the saving of the cum, the masturbation in the car, the leaving on of the tie, Trunks showing off his athleticism by the handstand pushups- all of it was just so incredibly erotic. And then at the end, seems Trunks was tormented by knowing that he couldn't have Gohan permanently, but was happy with the time he did get to spend with him. I liked the use of the belt too; at first I thought, oh no, don't hurt Trunks! but the use of it as a benign restraint was original and titillating. Amazing one shot, babe- you made my day. ;)
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