| "Owari Nai Yume ni Tamesarate mo" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: spiritwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2006 13:47 CST
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COME ON PLEASE UPDATE the story I love it I love the pairing hell it is a rare pairing I just want to read good stories the problem these days are authors start a story bt never finish them I just hope ths isn`t the case so PLEASE UPDATE SOON
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 15:50 CST
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Come on please update the story it is a really good story
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2006 14:03 CST
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Well that was a pretty good chapter and who is this kid anyway is he actually a young version of Susake or what oh well update soon I cann`t wait to find out what is going to happen next wait now that I think of it how can Hinata help Naruto out with the mission didn`t she just give birth to her child oh well like I said update soon please I actually like this story alot mainly because it is a Naruto and Tenten pairing I hope
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 10:26 CST
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I really like this story I really ike this chapter I just hope Naruto hooks up with Tenten she is hot and I like that pairing oh well please update soon and I hope it doesn`t take as long as it took update this chapter anyways keep up the great work
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 13:33 CDT
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Come on and update the story please don`t be like some authors and start a story and never finish it this is a good story so update it
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2006 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story I love the pairing heck it is rare to find a Naruto story with this pairing I hate to say it but i kinda seems like ppl want to write gay pairing that ruins the Naruto show well thats just my opinion oh well PLEASE UPDATE soon I cann`t wait to read more of this story
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf26 On: October 10, 2006 18:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I read the story I really liked it and I would love to see more stories with Naruto and Tenten paired up her and Hinata its really good and also sad heck my heart felt sad at the last part of the story please update soon please
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf26 On: October 10, 2006 16:08 CDT
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Well I haven`t read the story yet but I have a question and that is when Ilooked to see how many chapters there is but what confusesme is what happe to chapter 2 it goes 1,3,4 and 5 but no 2 thats is confusing oh well I guess I wil have to just read the story
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Reviewed By: Tenten On: October 10, 2006 11:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man i cant believe that lee dies-_- !_! that makes me so damn sad! but its pretty good, im kina confused on the whole hinta in labor thingy how many children does she have?0_0 im so sad that lee dies naruto tenten is a good couple but i always thought tenten would be better off with gaara PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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