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| "INANE AFFECTIONS" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Sontara On: June 07, 2007 16:35 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!!!!!!! I love this fic! (to aly95959; i agree,) it MUST MUST MUST be continued! (to dark angel-justice, that would have been a cool end to the chapter, but probably would have screwed up the rest of the fic (no offense). I think u need to bee a little more distinct when changing points of veiw, it can be confusing ( like, for example, more paragraph breaks). Boyaraina, I support your fics 100%, don't quit now; U HAVE UPDATING TO DO. : )
| Reviewed By: dark angel-justice On: September 04, 2006 00:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Comment/Review:
I think in the last fic chapter,Neji last sentence should have been like: I forbid it,Your Mine .... As his voice trailed off and press his body agiast her's hard and fast with a kiss to coner of her lips and quit hiss of MINE... then left in a swirl of leaves. How bout that.
| Title: good!
Reviewed By: aly95959 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2006 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its very good but it doesnt seem like the end is there... i dont understand it... are u going to continue it?
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