| "Fun with the Sexy Jutsu" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Some random reader On: April 17, 2017 06:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg so good! Please update!!!!
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Title: YOU
Reviewed By: FireRed On: May 12, 2016 20:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Y-You Evil Person , you make the cool guys in Naruto or Shippuden
rapist and make Naruto(Naruko-chan) Poor T-T... But the story is so
good too bad the story can't be continued at all... Good story
btw...
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Title: wtf is this?
Reviewed By: CelestIndigo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2009 20:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
What kind of crap is this? Raping Naruto's female form? It was a nice build up, nice idea, but then you got to the sex. And the ending. I'm not even going to read the next two chapters.
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Reviewed By: jordy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2008 20:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im sad i read this about a year ago and u havent updated .... so PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: jordy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2008 16:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
enjoyment factor 100,000 your story is greayt and every time i log on i check to see if you have updated or not and you havent!!! jeez please update!!!
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Reviewed By: jordy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2007 18:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really good plz update
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Title: Best Fic Ever
Reviewed By: mrbocaj88 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2007 06:14 PDT
Comment/Review:
It was the Best I've ever read! Sooo Perverted! So Evil! So Lustful! You have a talent! Keep on wrighting or 'So help me Ra!' I felt like I was reading the Naruto novel 'Inocent Heart Demonic Blood' but only Perverted! I hope you continue to write. BTW..... I have a suggestion... how bout for a next fanfic you write a story for Jaraia's #1 BEST SELLER "Icha Icha Paradise" (Make-Out Paradise)
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Reviewed By: yer lil demon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 20:58 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
XDDDD *dies off laughter* wow the last chapter so far made me fall out of my seat!hehehehehe please update!
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Title: Uhhh
Reviewed By: disturbed_mediocrity [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2007 19:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll give you points for creativity, but this story is just really... ummm... not that good. Not only was the rape of Naruto (AKA Naruko) very inappropriate, but it was also written poorly. Also, the fact she got pregnant so quickly is impossible, and for her to carry so many "kits" is highly unlikely. You can argue that the Kyuubi makes it possible, but it doesn't. I don't think it has any impact on Naruto's/Naruko's fertility, and I don't think it would make her carry THAT many children. I also died a little inside upon reading who the rapist were. Why was Kabuto there? Since when is Iruka that kind of guy? And, ew, anal to mouth is gross and dangerous... I'm rambling.. Like I said, points for creativity, but the story just isn't that good.
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Title: New Name
Reviewed By: Paper Ace Restored [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2006 09:02 PDT
Comment/Review:
I am the writer of this fan fic but I will be updating this fan fic under a new name just to let you know and thanks for the reviews.
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Title: ..........whoa
Reviewed By: jetset6 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2006 14:56 PDT
Comment/Review:
very dirty and sinister. i like it *nosebleed*
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Title: Crazy
Reviewed By: Bio Uotani [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 11:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an awesome fanfic. Please countinue to write. It's a little perverted though. Still totally awsome. I love it! But it's still kind of nasty. But totally sweet!
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Reviewed By: Naruto_Lovr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 14:42 PDT
Comment/Review:
YOU EVIL, EVIL PERSON! I hate you having Naruto getting raped. But so far I love the story. Update soon.
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