Reviewed By: lindy On: September 13, 2006 21:30 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 5 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review: Hey there! I like the idea. Never thought of Kagome as being plain but hey, gotta love that creative license. The only suggestion I would give is to add some spaces to the chapter. Having it in one big clump is hard on the eyes. Other then that it sounds like you have a good story base. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. See you then!